I have been thinking about endings a lot lately. For two reasons. Firstly because I am giving a talk to a group of novel writing students in a week or so about getting the climax and ending right, and secondly because I am working on my revisions for Portraits of Celina and working diligently on, among other things, getting the climax and ending right. (And it has been SO hard, but I think I am getting there. Slowly.)
Endings are important. Endings are worth the effort.
Because after all - and I don't know where this quote originated (sorry) - "Your opening will sell this book, but it is your ending that will sell your next."
A while back I blogged some killer openers. So in the interests of symmetry and fairness, here are some cracker endings.
The Book Thief, Markus Zuzak
"All I was able to do was turn to Liesel Meminger and tell her the only truth I truly know. I said it to the book thief and I say it now to you.
A LAST NOTE FROM THE NARRATOR
I am haunted by humans."
Looking for Alibrandi, Melina Marchetta
"You know, a wonderful thing happened to me when I reflected back on my year.
'One day" came.
Because finally I understood."
The Help, Kathryn Stockett
"Maybe I ain't too old to start over, I think and I laugh and cry at the same time at this. Cause just last night I thought I was finished with everything new."
Chocolat, Joanne Harris
"Hoping that this time it will remain a lullaby. That this time the wind will not hear. That this time - please, just this once - it will leave without us."
All That I Am, Anna Funder
"Bev tips the half-cup of black fluid down the sink. She pulls the phone from its cradle in the wall, dials the necessary number and starts to clean."
My favourites here have to be The Book Thief and Chocolat, but they all give you that wonderful sense of completion, don't you think?
The blog of children's and YA author Sue Whiting - sharing her passion for books and the ups and downs of the writing life.
Saturday, October 13, 2012
Sunday, October 7, 2012
Snapshots of Children's Book Week 2012
I know Book Week was over weeks ago. But I have been busy working on revisions for my novel Portraits of Celina (Out in April), and haven't had a chance to post about my Book Week adventures. Until now.
Book Week 2012 was a wonderful week full of warm welcomes, enthusiastic students and teachers, terrific displays, amazing lunches and morning teas and lots of fun storytelling and joy about books. (And a crackly voice that just hung in there. Phew.)
A big thank you to the teacher librarians who hosted me and did such a fab job of preparing their students. Here are a few pics of some of the highlights.
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Uncle Alien by Jake at Caddies Creek |
Sunday, August 19, 2012
On the road again - Book Week 2012
I'm sitting up in bed, snug, my doona pulled up to my chin. It's gloriously sunshiny though a little windy outside. The house is quiet, and I am savouring this last tiny shard of peace, solitude and calm, before chaos reigns again.
This week is Book Week - the busiest, craziest week of the year for children's authors and illustrators in Australia. (So busy for some that it becomes "Book Month", but for me with a full-time job, it's just a week.) It is the week when schools and libraries hold bookish events, have character parades, invite authors and illustrators to speak, congratulate the Book of the Year winners and celebrate the joy of books and stories.
I love it.
So once I hop out of bed this morning, I will be dusting off my giant spider puppet, giving my cardboard fire engine a bit of a shine, packing my dress-up clothes (and some "real" clothes as well), collecting up my books, and all the while, rehearsing my stories in my mind (in case I have forgotten any of them!). Then it's time to hit the road. Five days, five schools, fifteen sessions, hundreds and hundreds of students. To coin a famous phrase: "I'm excited!"
Happy Book Week everyone.
This week is Book Week - the busiest, craziest week of the year for children's authors and illustrators in Australia. (So busy for some that it becomes "Book Month", but for me with a full-time job, it's just a week.) It is the week when schools and libraries hold bookish events, have character parades, invite authors and illustrators to speak, congratulate the Book of the Year winners and celebrate the joy of books and stories.

So once I hop out of bed this morning, I will be dusting off my giant spider puppet, giving my cardboard fire engine a bit of a shine, packing my dress-up clothes (and some "real" clothes as well), collecting up my books, and all the while, rehearsing my stories in my mind (in case I have forgotten any of them!). Then it's time to hit the road. Five days, five schools, fifteen sessions, hundreds and hundreds of students. To coin a famous phrase: "I'm excited!"
Happy Book Week everyone.
Friday, July 20, 2012
Finding the five-year-old me
I am doing a workshop in Canberra in a few weeks’ time on
finding your inner child and writing from deep within a child’s point of view.
In preparation for this, I have been spending my morning train writing time
going for a bit of a wander down memory lane, trying to reacquaint myself with
my inner five-year-old.

I did recall an early childhood “friend” and event that I
had totally forgotten about though. Her name was Jennifer (last name unknown)
and these are the things I remember:
- She was related to someone famous – perhaps Bobby Limb (can’t be certain) and the five-year-old me found this amazingly exciting. I was in awe of her because of it – even slightly jealous.
- She was pretty and tidy and frilly and I aspired to be like her. I thought she was a much, much better person than me. She fascinated me.
- I was invited to her birthday party at her house. I felt that it was a great honour to be invited. I was excited and nervous about going.
- Her house was white and large. Two storeys – which to me meant that she was also very, very rich. Inside there was a wide sweeping staircase that I longed to climb, but wasn’t brave enough.
- In her backyard there was a wooden cubbyhouse fitted out with play stoves and tables and shelves and couches. Another sign of wealth. There was a swing hanging from a tree and the grass was the softest and greenest grass I had ever felt or seen.
- I recall Jennifer in a white frilly dress swinging wildly on the swing, her long blond curls streaming out behind her.
- I felt that she was out of reach for me. And that I was just lucky to have been invited to her party.
Interestingly, there are lots of things about the party that I can’t remember – things you would think would have been important to the five-year-old me, such as: any other children or people, party food, presents, balloons and party games. Not sure what this means, but I find it intriguing.
I came across an article on a similar topic the
other day by Alane Ferguson about channelling your inner teenager that is worth a read. I have much stronger
memories of my teenage years. Perhaps that is why I have been attracted to
writing novels for young adults of late.
Sunday, July 15, 2012
On the laps of their parents
I
love this quote! (I know, I am a little “quote” crazy at the moment - forgive me.) But
doesn’t it say it all?
Last blog post touched on the importance and worth of reading, and the joy of becoming a lifelong reader, but how do we get our kids on that path?
Reading to your child from an early age is most definitely the first step.
It is one of the most wonderful ways
to develop positive attitudes to reading. And I believe there is no better way for a child to
discover the magic and power of story, to engage their imaginations and for
reading to be associated with feelings of warmth, nurturing, security and love than, as Emilie so eloquently put it, "on the laps of their parents".
In
the National Year of Reading, let’s have three cheers for the parents out there
who are laying this important foundation, so their children have the best chance of becoming lifelong
readers – so they too can say one day: I love2read.
Saturday, July 7, 2012
For the love of books
I am a wordy. There is no doubt about it. I love writing. Reading. Words. Story. Books.
Lately, I have taken to collecting those catchy sayings and sentiments that often appear on Facebook declaring a similar love of books.
Things like:
"I love walking into a bookstore. It's like all my friends are sitting on shelves, waving their pages at me." Tahareh Mafi
"Sometimes when I'm alone I like to sniff books." Source unknown
"Bookworms will rule the world - as soon as we finish one more chapter..." Harlequin.com
"Books are the quietest and most constant of friends; they are the most accessible and wisest of counsellors, and the most patient of teachers." Charles William Eliot (My personal fave.)
I have a stack more! I don't know why I have started collecting these - they sing to me somehow, warm my heart and reassure me that there are others who share my love of the written word and my belief in the power of story.
When I was a Primary School Teacher, I always endeavoured not only to teach my students how to read, but also to guide them in taking their first steps on the path of becoming lifelong readers.
Research and experience have told us that reading has many benefits, that it is important. Reading improves vocabulary, concentration, focus and memory. It develops active mental processes, and helps children to become engaged learners. It stimulates the imagination and reduces stress. It provdes a wonderful escape.
But wait! There's more.
Most importantly, reading allows us to explore what it means to be human. It allows us to walk in someone else's shoes for a while, to view the world through someone else's eyes. To experience what it is like to be courageous or weak; shy or alone; to be persecuted, misjudged, misguided; to be bullied or shunned. It allows us to develop empathy and understand many different realities.
And in the words of CS Lewis: "We read to know we are not alone."
Three cheers for the National Year of Reading. I love2read!
Sunday, June 10, 2012
Capturing
How can you not love a book that opens with the line, “I
write this sitting in the kitchen sink.”?


She is not always satisfied with her “captures” and vows to
work harder at her craft.
“I am aware this is not a fair portrait of him. I must
capture him again later.”
“How can one capture the pool of light in the courtyard, the
golden windows, the strange long-ago look ...?”
What glorious fodder for a writer – and what excellent
advice. I love the notion of “capturing”. Isn’t this exactly what we try to do
as writers? To capture characters, moments, feelings and places and somehow translate
them into words on the page. To capture them precisely or evocatively or
eloquently. Or originally? Uniquely?
It is also interesting to note that Smith was so anxious
about her novel that once she completed the manuscript, she worked on her
revisions for a further two years, where she wrote and rewrote every line. It
shows! The characters are so superbly drawn and deliciously quirky, the relationships
between the characters complex, authentic and true, and the voice of the
narrator doesn’t miss a beat.
For writers and aspiring writers this book is a must-read.
There are so many lessons hidden within each page. I don’t know how I have
managed to get through life without reading it before now.
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